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not to sure how to go about posting a redone song but this is a redo of the song i posted yesterday titled invisable i reworked it today . to me it sounds better and did spell chk hope it goes over a little better any kind of crit is help full
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I am one becoming two.
It's a hopeless existence,
where no can see the real me.
What can I do?
How do I show them what I want to be?
What can I do?
How do i get their attention off themselves?
What should i do?
(screamed) What should I do?!!!


I could shout at the top of gasping lungs.
I could step from their shadows,
and in to my light.
I could loose all control and kill my alter ego, or pour out my bleeding heart and soul____l!

But I don't so they don't know,
that sometimes I feel like a mummy in a forgotten tomb
sealed in tight with nothing to do
but wait to be found under solid ground.
Tonight I could make my last plea,
or jump from the top of my family tree.

i could shout at the top of gasping lungs.
i could step from their shadows,
and in to my light.
i could loose all control and kill my alter ego, or pour out my bleeding heart and soul____l!

i feel this need to fill my hunger inside for what they got
i have not.
this world around me is filled with people that are colder,
so maybe i just need to be bolder.

And I could shout at the top of gasping lungs.
I could step from their shadows,
and in to my light.
I could loose all control and kill my alter ego, or pour out my bleeding heart and soul____l!
Pour out my bleeding heart and soul____l!
Pour out my bleeding heart and soul____l!
(screamed) Pull out my bleeding heart and soul____l!!
Last edited by deminos at May 29, 2006,