#1
dont know why but i cant stop writing or trying to write
worte this in first person but i guess its about a guy betrayed buy his king president furor what ever and leads the rebellion aginst him some of its sounds like a speech whatever here:
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IM to weak for this hell
i've choked down to many of your lies
im to weak to even breathe
I see now your the one to despise
and i want you to know
i will cut out the hatred
you implanted in my soul
give it time
your rein will end
soon i will lead the fight
to strike you down
my old friend

the tyrant is too strong we must
act as one and bring him down
put him in the ground
all his hate will be his undoing
for each life he bruised
will be an ally to our cause

fight for your lives and that of your kin
fight for your country and repent all your sin
stand up for what you believe
never agin will we be deceived

the tyrant is too strong we must
act as one and bring him down
put him in the ground
all his hate will be his undoing
for each life he bruised
will be an ally to our cause

guitar break


the tyrant is too strong!! we must
act as one
and
bring
him
down!!
put him in the ground!!
all his hate will be his undoing
for each life he bruised
will be an ally to our cause

The time has come to make our own destiny
our day has come we will listen to no more of his blaspheme
blas phe me!!

freedom is close its almost in our hand
soon his blood will spill
and we take back our land!!!
#2
all his hate will be his undoing
for each life he bruised
will be an ally to our cause

Really liked this bit, on a whole i thought it was well written, a nice piece well done
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#3
this piece made me laugh. but in a good way. i think it's an interesting piece. it'd be really, really cool if you could put this to good music.

all his hate will be his undoing
for each life he bruised
will be an ally to our cause

this part really made me laugh. my name's ally. :-P
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