i have a demo of my band live at


it doesnt really do the song justise, as it was a rip from a camcorder, but i would like to know what your opinions on it are. i will critique any recordings in return if you wish.
the vocal are sketchy though it could just be the live recording... also the lyrics are a bit cheesy they could use a bit more life other than that you guys are decent musicians.

the melody gets boring after awhile at about 1:22

i enoyed listening to this though

check out my bands live recording https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=366092