#1
Right here

Have a listen and tell me what I do wrong ;x
Just some improv
I know the tone is horrible, don't laugh
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Last edited by LAGZO at May 29, 2006,
#3
I listened to Canon in D. Start was good but your tone is terrible. sounds way to trebly and it sounds like your amp has a 5 inch speaker. You missed out on some parts and the sweep when the backing track goes silent.

Needs a bit of work but more practice and i reckon you would get there, and work on the tone.
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#4
Well, on scom, the tone was terrible, the bt sounds like it has a horn section for a while, and just eh.

Your licks are substandard and boring, out of time, a bit sloppy, unsure, and have annoying bends, sorry. You seem to rush them a lot.

You may abuse pinches, or that may be your tone. Phrasing got better when you played the actual solo, oh well.

Your rhythm falted on the stop start section.
Just need a little work, not terrible. Check mine out over in or?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=364030
#5
Thanks for the crits/advice. My tone is pretty crappy until I can upgrade my recording setup, which is a Computer mic

Yeah, I get ya on the licks thing. I'm stuck on pentatonics, hope its just a phase though.
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#7
^^ Me either. Horrible tone, and you played canon in D wrong.
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#8
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^^ Me either. Horrible tone, and you played canon in D wrong.


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Have a listen and tell me what I do wrong ;x
Just some improv
I know the tone is horrible, don't laugh


Yes, ear piercing tone. Hurts doesn't it
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