#1
Trying to be perfect, To follow popularity
To be like the famous, corrupting society
We all see the truth and lies
An Outburst of Where and Why's
When something happens That we didnt know
Continues and caries on, even though
We all ask for an end, a final point
the kids believe, and now we know that

We try to be and now we are
Everything that is going wrong
We follow what the media says
And we are picke dup between a tong
Our memories are all of Those
Things we wished were someone elses

And now we follow like that little game
We are under the command of our celebrities
We watch in torment as we watch everyone go under
In the ever changing news, The false truth
It eats inside, changing who we are
And what we think of our life os far
It goes and hides behind our built up lies
and now we know that

We try to be and now we are
Everything that is going wrong
We follow what the media says
And we are picke dup between a tong
Our memories are all of Those
Things we wished were someone elses

Solo*

We try to be and now we are
Everything that is going wrong
We follow what the media says
And we are picke dup between a tong
Our memories are all of Those
Things we wished were someone elses
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#2
Alright. 1st verse is very good. But what the **** is with the chorus? Oh, I know! It blows balls. Please change it. The whole "media" deal has been done by bands like Green Day, all American Rejects, and Anti-Flag over and over again. Try and mak the chorus unique rather than something people expect. "Oh media controllin' us, ok. Ok, government evil, ok."
#3
Quote by Zuka
Alright. 1st verse is very good. But what the **** is with the chorus? Oh, I know! It blows balls. Please change it. The whole "media" deal has been done by bands like Green Day, all American Rejects, and Anti-Flag over and over again. Try and mak the chorus unique rather than something people expect. "Oh media controllin' us, ok. Ok, government evil, ok."


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