#1
hey i hope you like this. its takne me while to fit this to a peice of music i have but plz crit. and i dont feel like dealing with spam so plz crits only.

Off My Wall

Laying in the grass looking up to the sky,
Was I meant to have this wonderful life?
I don?t know, so bring these emotions off my wall,
Off my wall,
Off my wall,

Standing there like I had been struck by lightning,
Were we meant to be? You and me?
I don?t know, but will you let me fall?
Let me fall?
Let me fall?

Whispering in your ear like kids used to do,
Do you love me? Because I love you,
I don?t know, but if I need you, will you call?
Will you call?
Will you call?

Laying in the grass looking up to the sky,
Was I meant to have this wonderful life?
I don?t know, so bring these emotions off my wall,
Off my wall,
Off my wall,

thanx
#2
Very cliche, especially the laying in the grass part.

There's not much that really stands out here, for me. Sorry.