Pretty good.. might wanna throw in some distortion.. unless that's as distorted as your amp goes.

The intro and final chorus sounded a little sketchy. That's about it though.

Good job though, keep at it.
Last edited by kiefermatot at May 30, 2006,
Yea I was using guitar port, and when i have it really distorted its all staticy and poopy sounding. Thanks for the crit though.
sweet cover, especially if you did that on the squire you have in the picture. I can't really do anything with mine.

The intro was a tad shaky..as was the end. Good cover...maybe consider adding some vox.
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Yes it was done on my Squire you see in the picture. And that picture is like 2 years ago, I'm actually 16 now. Thanks for the crits guys I really appreciate them.
very very nice, it was enjoyable lol, perfect on probably all of it, all correct, now if you can get vocals id be sweet great job

Thanks a lot guys for the crits. I wish i could do vocals, but unfortunatly im not a good singer If anyone would like to do vocals for it be my guest.
I made the cover on the myspace downloadable for anyone that wants to try some vocals.