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downloading right now.

it goes out of key immediately but the vocals are decent.

the lyrics aren't that great but the voice fits the guitar pretty well despite key problems.

the drums are good where they come in

you are having dynamics issues.

your voice follows the music nothing insane but the problems is the guitar is off so the song is off.

the drums really fit the music though.

it gets better at 2:50 though but you cant hope the listener will wait that long for the song to get good.

try reordering the parts of the song and placing alot more distinction between the parts of it... just write it out in a list.
Last edited by silentdud at May 31, 2006,