#2
I like the intro, it's very built up for what's to come, but it think you need to make "what's to come" just a little bigger and more explosive. Otherwise, vocals are decent, could be better, try to add some nice harmonies during the quiet parts. The song itself is really good, nice chords and riffs, all it really needs is some polish.

Great Job, keep it up.
"Say hello to my little friend!"
#3
hey thanks man yeah i know there is something missing, something we can do to it but im still working on it

thanks alot

matt