#1
I have a song appropiately titled unfinished song on myspace. I was just hoping to get some opinions of where I should with it from there. Any suggestions/criticism are welcome. Thanks in advance.

www.myspace.com/guitarwylde03
Originally Posted by sadistic_monkey
Does this rag smell like chloroform to you?


My Gear:
Ibanez Rg320DX (81/85)
Alvarez Classic Electric
B-52 AT-100
Roland Cube 15
Marshall Avt Cab
Crate Blue Voodoo Cab (V30's)
Last edited by guitarwylde03 at May 31, 2006,
#2
I changed it a little more. Please, some give me some ideas on this one, I think it could be pretty good. I'm working on a solo for it and I will record that soon.


By the way, crit 4 crit
Originally Posted by sadistic_monkey
Does this rag smell like chloroform to you?


My Gear:
Ibanez Rg320DX (81/85)
Alvarez Classic Electric
B-52 AT-100
Roland Cube 15
Marshall Avt Cab
Crate Blue Voodoo Cab (V30's)
#3
wow im liking the harmony... nice guitar work man
nice quality too
keep it up
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#4
I like it and it seems its smoothed of those annoying frequencies that usually make me dislike over drive.

the second guitar comes in in a good fashion I like the concept. All you need is the lead to make up some sort of melody to bust out right at the end of that clip, just make sure its a good one. take your time choosing it because you definitely built it up until that point.
#5
I'm working on this song right now. I just put bass on what i have so far. I'm thinking of going into some sort of slow harmony, or octave part that sounds good in my head, but I'll see.
Originally Posted by sadistic_monkey
Does this rag smell like chloroform to you?


My Gear:
Ibanez Rg320DX (81/85)
Alvarez Classic Electric
B-52 AT-100
Roland Cube 15
Marshall Avt Cab
Crate Blue Voodoo Cab (V30's)