#4
I liked that plenty. I would add plenty more lead to the whole section after the solo. It just sounded hollow after it was over. I also agree with Psytox, it does sound slightly incomplete, try a fade-out instead.

I really did like it though, keap at it!
#5
that was awesome man. everything blended together so well. The best parts being measure 14 and measure 24 when the lead guitar came in. Although I do agree that there could be a few lead guitar parts that would sound great after the solo, but other than that, it was great.
#6
If the solo had a slight phaser and a little wah while it was overdriven, that would be the ****ing god music.
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