I liked that plenty. I would add plenty more lead to the whole section after the solo. It just sounded hollow after it was over. I also agree with Psytox, it does sound slightly incomplete, try a fade-out instead.

I really did like it though, keap at it!
that was awesome man. everything blended together so well. The best parts being measure 14 and measure 24 when the lead guitar came in. Although I do agree that there could be a few lead guitar parts that would sound great after the solo, but other than that, it was great.
If the solo had a slight phaser and a little wah while it was overdriven, that would be the ****ing god music.
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