#1
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Fire Woman


Woke up this morning
Looked to the side
Saw fire burning
In your eyes
There's a whole lotta passion
There's a whole lotta love
I'm feeling your body baby
This is a whole lotta fun

You make me scream
You make me scream
You make me scream
Fire baby, fire baby

10 years down the road
We're sitting in a restraunt
Candle's burning brightly
And so is our love
You slowly sip your wine
A spirited glare; wink of my eye
Like hot embers in a furnace
When we're home tonight

You make me scream
You make me scream
You make me scream
Fire baby, fire baby

Now, we're getting old
I look into your eyes
It's not the same as before
You gota new disguise
These aren't flames of love
These aren't flames of love
You kiss me like I'm a stranger
Baby, I'm gonna miss ya, coz

You make me scream
You make me scream
You make me scream
Fire baby, fire baby

The dust has settled
All is done and gone
You left me for a new life
I'm still stuck here at home
I can't describe my pain
I'm hurting all the same
All I want to find
is some peace of mind

You make me scream!
You make me scream!
You make me scream!
Fire woman, Fire woman
aint no angel gonna great me?
Last edited by guitarzak at Jun 1, 2006,
#2
not the deepest piece ever but a fair theme, it flows reasonably well. And im sure "whole lotta love" has to be somehow trademarked.
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#3
Totally led zep. Maybe change the last line of the chorus to "fire lady, fire baby" or summin, I don't know. Mix of a hendrix like chorus and zep verses, methinks.
#5
Very basic, so add depth. If, hoewever, it works for the music in the song stay with it.