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Remembering those days
I wish that I could bring you back
To me......
The times we used to spend
Forgotten, but not so soon lost
To me......

When you were mine
I was happiest
When you were mine
I knew I had it all
When you were mine
That's when I was myself......

What happened to what we had
Did it fade away to nothing?
To you......
As I sit and wonder now
Was it something I did?
To you......

When you were mine
I was happiest
When you were mine
I knew I had it all
When you were mine
That's when I was myself

But now all that we had is gone
Left with none but shame and scorn
Hiding from our tragic past
Wondering what went wrong

Sometimes I stay awake at night
Dreaming of your face
But now all that I can remember
Was that you were a waste...
Of my time
Of my feelings

It was never worth it at all
I remember the pain you put me through
When you were mine


This was inspired by a much needed break up between my and my GirlFriend.. Needless to say I was in need of it, because it definitely was hurting me, although I hid from the true so long..

It's kind of a metal song, but I guess it would be more depressed metal.. slow and heavy.

First song I've written, so I don't expect it to be good.. But i did put my heart into it, that's what counts.
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Honestly, its not bad and its not great, its average because the lyrical content is so cliche. Try to change some words like 'waste' 'happiest' and all those type of words.
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