New song I just came up with, its pretty akward, i know the chords in the beggining are a little iffy.

okay, i just changed it and added a really wierd breakdown which i like. it sounds much heavier in real life though. i took the advice and took out that really wierd riff.
Last edited by ouchies at Jun 2, 2006,
i thought it was pretty damn sinister. i liked the rythym for the intro. i didn't like how Major it sounded sometimes like the 4/5 slides and what not. and i really think you should get rid of measures 28-37...it just kills it. other than that, i liked it.

here's one of mine: not death metal