#1
AUTOEXILE

It?s holy no more
Don?t fall for deceit
It will never be
As it was before
Narcissus blocks the path
The time will come
And it shall be done
Not before the wrath
Give all you have

This house is no longer a home
It?s more like a tomb
I hear wailing spirits
In every room
They cry out to me
Save your blood from doom

Open arms receive me
I watch you smile
At my self exile
I know you need me
We counted the days
We were banished too
Here we waited for you
Quarantine the plague
Do this in my name

This house is no longer a home
It?s more like a tomb
I hear wailing spirits
In every room
They cry out to me
Save your blood from doom
#2
Nicely done...I like the rhyme scheme and it puts a fairly good image in my head when i read it. But if I could ask, were you thinking of a particular subject when you wrote this?
And could you check out mine? Its on this page somewhere lol.
#3
"Save your blood from doom" that is so cliche it hurts other than that i liked it
Originally posted by the best of...
Vin Diesel was once asked if he believed in the idea of reincarnation. His response was simply "I used to be a plate of pancakes."
#4
Great job, good title. Realy can't find anything wrong with it.
#5
Great. I really like it. Great rhyme. Great lyric. Flow is nice. When its a great song you know it.
#6
very cool dude! really liked the "theme", story thing....can't explain...great song!
"rage, pilage, burn, and run away"