i really liked it nice and melodic sounds kinda majestic to me in a sense. id make it some kind of balladish song good job on it
Thanks for the comments, and I left my thoughts on y'alls songs. By the way, if ya want to hear the song, I recorded it. You can get to it through my sig. Its called Original #1.
wow...i was expecting some dissonant chordy things with measures ended in the wrong place and what not...but that was really good. especially for a first song, i wish my first song had sounded that good. keep it up. and mine are in my sig.
The fingerpicked part I felt was beautiful, but I wasn't keen on the strummed chords part in powertab. However it sounds great in your recording. Great job, I love it.
My "Rig":

Fender American Telecaster
Boss OD-2
EHX Small Clone
I like it alot dude. That's incredibly good for a first piece, especially since I kind of had the same attitude as afortuneinlies coming into it. Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=370434
Washburn WI66 Pro E Celtic Cross (1 of 48!)
Washburn WI66 Pro Honeyburst
Takamine EG334SC Acoustic-Electric
Peavey XXX 120W All Tube Half Stack
Line6 MM4/FM4/DL4
Boss NS2
Vox Snakecharmer Compressor
Digitech XP100 Whammy Wah