#1
first song
dont b to mean lol jkin
Night Man

Verse I
Flashes rolling across the sky
Streaks of fury light up the night
Desperate screams pierce through the air
Darkness engulfs those roaming about
You better run and save yourself
The Night Man roams the deadly streets

Chorus
Night Man looking for victims
Night Man looking for vengeance
Night Man looking for sinners
Night Man looking for you!

Ohh..yeah?.

Verse II
He is a mystery, hiding behind a cloak
No one knows if he?s man or beast
He hates mankind and all its evils
He has his own laws he has his own ways
He is the jury, he is the judge, and he is the executioner

Chorus
Night Man looking for victims
Night Man looking for vengeance
Night Man looking for sinners
Night Man looking for you!

Bridge
Night Man!
(Laughs)

Guitar solo #1

Verse III
He avenges the weak and defenseless
He destroys the evil and vile
As you?re walking picking up the pace,
Don?t look behind you just keep walking home
The footsteps you hear are all in your head!


Chorus
Night Man looking for victims
Night Man looking for vengeance
Night Man looking for sinners
Night Man looking for you!

Bridge

Night Man coming for you!
(drag out)

Guitar solo # 2

Outro
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#3
How very Ozzy of you. 7/10.
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#4
god i finally found my username! well anyways yeah thats the song was writen by me and my other guitarist. It was our first crack at writing. I thank you for ur comments.Do you know any way to make it better? thanks again for your help.

p.s. our band is called Sound Of The Electric.
Last edited by SGhardrokr at Jun 3, 2006,
#5
thats really funny cuz we are influenced by Sabbath and Ozzy alot!When I first wrote it i didnt really notice but now i do,lol
Last edited by SGhardrokr at Jun 3, 2006,
#6
hmmmm... pretty nice.. I pictured like... the Angel of Death meets Batman or the Punisher or something (I also thought of Iron Man, but thats probably just the Sabbath influences in the writing). like the song
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