#1
a sreaming song pretty much, afi like

tears form inside your chest
breaking upon impact
lungs breathe, frail words
spilling themselves into your mind
throughout history you
have lied asleep at night
waking just to spite this world

complaining about all these words
the writing is on the wall
lipstick smers from ear to ear
make up bleeds from your eyes
all because you couldnt control
your shakes

heart attack breaks this silence
but silence is how you were born
in a room with a silver lining
so very far away tonight.
you lied, these words are here
knocking on the roof or your mouth
tyring to force their way out

complaining about all these words
the writing is on the wall
lipstick smers from ear to ear
make up bleeds from your eyes
all because you couldnt control
your shakes

you got scared so you screamed
hateful words into the air
but this air is filled with gas
so this match i do ignite
and there you are all alone
standing there, burning bright!


i will hav a look at you one if u tell me wot u think. thanks
MindFire!
#2
It was alright. Nothing to special, but nothing really bad about it.

7/10. I'm not to keen on the style, but I found the lyrics okay. Good job.