#2
Tone is crap, but that's not the point. I like some of the sections. There was a little run that reminded me of the bass synth in Michael Jackson's "Black or White". Maybe a little random, even for a jam, but I play like that alot. Some nice speed sections, but I'd like to hear more flow and maybe some little segues into each change.

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