#1
a little poem i wrote. its the only thing i havent already posted and i have other better stuff but i dont want it stolen.

Acts of Random Violence

i visited my friend the other day
and to my suprise there he lay
bloody and bruised on his front step
beaten to death with a baseball bat

i walked through the front door
all his stuff was on the floor
his house was completely trashed
and he lay there bloody and bashed
beaten to death with a baseball bat

it walked into his backyard, big and green
i found a young man, ugly and mean
and in his hands was a bloody baseball bat
so i beat him dead with a rake, ATTACK!
Last edited by Shadowz_at_Dawn at Jun 5, 2006,
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#5
And i mean that with respect. The ending was a little wierd.
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#6
Quote by Ibanez4
And i mean that with respect. The ending was a little wierd.


i tried to make it rhyme with beaten to death with a baseball bat lol. atleast your comment wasnt total ****.
#7
Quote by Shadowz_at_Dawn
i tried to make it rhyme with beaten to death with a baseball bat lol. atleast your comment wasnt total ****.


Sry man. Honestly i got very into it and the ending just made me laugh. I least expected it to go that way. But its all good.
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#8
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Sry man. Honestly i got very into it and the ending just made me laugh. I least expected it to go that way. But its all good.

loli meant it to be kinda funny. ive been in a writing slump lately. and i wasnt being sarcastic when i said your comment wasnt total **** lol.