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Hello

Hello

Hello

Some things
Permeate the chemicals
And penetrate the skin.


Sometimes
My thoughts are so warm, so rich,
That I just like to stop thinking
And bathe in them.


Last edited by scousertommy at Aug 26, 2006,
#2
I don't normally like this kind of very "arty" writing (even thought I'm guilty of it myself), but I have to say those last four lines gave me ****ing chills when I read them. So beautiful, so perfect, such a wonderful little gem of philosophy. ****ing brilliant.
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#4
Quote by scousertommy


I


Hello

Hello

Hello

Some things
Pervade the chemicals
And penetrate the skin.

Sometimes
My thoughts are so warm, so rich,
That I just like to stop thinking
And bathe in them.

I love you.

That was amazing.

Just...my god.

Wow...

Ok I'll stop now...just so amazing...

Sorry I have nothing to say about it other than that...
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Thanks...

Wow...just


wow.
#5
Quote by scousertommy



I



Hello

Hello

Hello I always love the repetition of either hello or goodbye, i believe its because their so cheap terminology, not really completely defined if you see what I'm saying

Some things
Pervade the chemicals
And penetrate the skin.I hated this... I dont know why but i truly dispised it


Sometimes
My thoughts are so warm, so rich,
That I just like to stop thinking
And bathe in them. Best four lines I've ever seen together, ever.



The last part made the poem and its great to see you back and in such great form, its nice to have people like Matt and you around to keep us n00bs in check as far as writing skills go
#7
Awesome. Just, awesome last stanza. I think it's the first piece I've read of yours, I think. I'm off to find more...