#1
This is my shot at trying to write a song about a girl that slipped away. I usually dont get responses when I post my lyrics so any would be awsome. Also maybe a recomendation for a name for this. Thx.


What are you trying to be?
Your resolutions are simple just open your eyes.
What am I supposed to be?
I can?t connect even though I strive.
These burdens laid upon my shoulders graced
By your presence, your beauty, my thoughts.

I remember you best by the way you?d look at me
I wish I could have saved what we had
I?m so sorry about it all.
Without me, you?ll always be better
Try to seal what I tore inside

I swore I could have changed you.
I just lost myself in your eyes.
Drowning you out will be easier
As soon as I remember to forget you
You thought I was all you were waiting for
Was I everything you wanted?
I could have been your everything.

I remember you best by the way you?d look at me
I wish I could have saved what we had
I?m so sorry about it all.
Without me, you?ll always be better
Try to seal what I tore inside

I didn?t mean to hurt you
I just wanted to love you
My problem is I can?t disperse
Trust me easily, more than anyone
Ill keep you close

I was wrong, you were right
As you slipped away, it took me too long to realize.
So thats the second time I got crabs.
#3
last line on the first verse doesnt flow but thats just me..
idk might be kinda boring... idk how you wanted it read.