this is just another song i wrote i hope ya'll like it plez leave some comments

The Pieces That Remain

torn and scattered
acroos this room
down't know
where i am
all these voices in my head
but can't remember what was said
don't know
why i'm so determined
to stay alive
cuz i know
that the world has forgotten me
even if they find me
before i go insane
all they'll find
are the pices that remain
of something that once was
part of a man
before the hand
of hatered
took its toll
destroyin my soul
when they came
it was hard to explain
cuz all they found
were the pieces that remain
Hey mate, one song per day, two per week...don't flood the forum please...sorry, delete some of your posts please.