#1
We went down to a local studio and recorded the song - just want some opinions, and constructive criticism!

(On the track there is one drum track, one bass, one guitar and two vocals)

The site were u can reach the track is

koil.dmusic.com

Thanks!!
I love the smell of napalm in the morning...Smells like victory
#3
that sucks

it works on my machine

hmmm - dunno lol
I love the smell of napalm in the morning...Smells like victory
#5
fair enuff - me likes ure dmusic stuff - tiz very creative - if i tryed to pull off lyrics like that i'd crash and burn, yet you seem to pull it off effortlessly


Kudos!
I love the smell of napalm in the morning...Smells like victory
#6
Three suggestions...
1) Metronome.
2) Don't have your progressions for the verse and chorus be the same.
3) Work on the dynamics.

You've definitely got potential; keep it up!!


Crit for crit?
Clicky (Select song "I'll Fly")
#7
good stuff!! vocals remind me of offspring while the guitar sounds rather grungey!
it sounds great! i posted some more on dmusic. i cant give any useful critisms as i think the songs great as it is!

if youd like to hear some music on the other side of the musical spectrum, my latest song is here: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=371538
Last edited by NeptuneUK at Jun 6, 2006,