#1
Hi this is my first songtext and i wanted to know if some of you may find him good or bad.


In here you can say what you want
No one will listen to you
in here you can scream so loud you want
you´ll never be heard

you´re locked up
in this cage you´re calling home
now it´s just prison living in here is hell
in ya imprison home
imprion in this cell you will die in your hell

you can´t reach out the door is locked
but you wont give up
the pain the hate the misery
won´t leave you alone
the sorrow the suffer the fear till death
till death you will endure this ****

i have no witness, no friend , no help
decaiyng till i die/ it´s driving you insane
i have ni tools no bed no food
dying till i live / that´s my hell my cell my imprison home

why the **** you don´t let me go
i just wanne go go outside go to live a senseful life
here´s just death pain misery and hate
i´m decaying till ****ing death
#2
Survey says: no good!

Why? I guess lyrics about not being able to leave your home and how it's killing you is kinda lame. I leave my home all the time--and I come back too!--but then again, I live on my own. Might appeal to a rebelious teen with no car though. My opinion only though, sorry dude.
Last edited by PlugOfDoom at Jun 6, 2006,
#3
In here you can say what you want
No one will listen to you
in here you can scream so loud you want
you´ll never be heard

Scream as loud as you want** Proper english is important!

Imprison home doesn't even go together. You need to do a spell and grammar check!