#1
Tried to describe the life of an agoraphobic, how he would like to go out and face the world, but can't.


I frame myself in color/for we all look good in black and white
I don't like to live with others/they don't know better than to fight
before my open window/lies the dying concrete World of hate
I'll never let it in no/ my place is here beyond the gate

and do you know, oh sweet cassandra
sitting by the stairs
know I am gone forever
do you even care?

The speed of all sorrounding / too fast to ever grab hold onto
and though my head is pounding / I will never start into the blue

and do you know, oh sweet cassandra
jumping through the air
know I am gone forever
do you even care?
#2
sry i don't have anything really constructive... i liked the chorus kinda but the verse didn't seem to flow at all for me... sry. could u take a look at mine called something profound? i would really appreciate it... thnx in advance

~Ellis
"the world will not know true peace until the power of love overcomes the love of power"
-Jimi Hendrix
#3
The first verse is pretty good, but you went into the chorus and lost your touch. The second verse wasn't that great either.