#2
pretty cool

i noticed you wer from michigan
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#3
i like the psycho sounding guitar!!!!
lead bit sounds a bit too much like foo fighters - times like these
get rid of the times like thesey bit in that riff and replace it. songs got potential! dont scrap it, its not condemned! the intro draws you into it!! it gets a neptune thumbs up!
id like to see this turned into a full song so keep it coming!

also get an account on Dmusic so its easier to organise and comment on your stuff.

hope you found some of my ramblings useful!

if youd like to critisize some of my stuff my latest track is here;
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=371538

thanks in advance