#1
"All"

Capo 6
G C E D C
-Verse 1
G
It's early in the morning
C D
and the sun begins to rise
G
but you're not here with me
C D
so I begin close my eyes
-Chorus
D
And, I start to think of
G
All the laughs
C
and all the cries
E
and all the smiles
D
all the while
C G
you would say to me
E D
I love you
C
yeah I love you

G C D

-Verse 2
It's a Sunday afternoon
and the sky is oh so blue
I wonder where you are
and I want to find you
-Chorus
Oh so, I start to think of
All the laughs
and all the cries
and all the smiles
all the while
you would say to me
I love you
yeah I love you
G C D E C D
-Verse 3
Now It's late at night
and the room has gotten so cold
but your not here to keep me warm
and your not for me to hold
-Chorus (quiet and slower)
Oh so, I start to think of
All the laughs
and all the cries
and all the smiles
all the while
you would say to me
I love you
yeah I love you
-Bridge ( louder and speed up)
G D
Well baby I love you, too
E D
I love you, too
G D
I love you, too
E D
I love you, too
-Chorus x2 (slow second time through)
And, I start to think of
All the laughs
and all the cries
and all the smiles
all the while
you would say to me
I love you
yeah I love you
G C D E C D (only first time through)
-Outro
G D
C (hit once)
yeah I love you
END
Last edited by CrusaderofTruth at Jun 12, 2006,
#4
give you props for having the whole song marked up and that you know a certian direction you want the peice to move in. At this point, not sure what else to crit you on. I think the second verse is a little bit of a let down, as is resembles the first just a little too much. Normally not a problem, but with the chorus being repeated so many times, there should be some more "meat" to the verses. Chord progression is pretty standard, but can be very effective.
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#5
I found the song slightly repetitive with the almost identical nature of the two verses. But the lyrics did convey the emotion of the song very well.
#6
Thanks for pointing out the close similarity in verse one and two. I didn't realize the second line of both of them are almost identical.
#7
You need another acoustic guitar playing leads and mybe a good solo. Nothing difficult. songs like that don't need hard solos. Very good!!
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#9
okay so I changed some stuff. I removed the repeat of the chorus between verse 1 and 2, and after verse 3. I also changed verse 2 because it was so similiar to verse one.

Verse 2
*Origanally*
Its a Sunday afternoon
and the sun is shinning bright
I start to look for you
but you're no where in sight

*Changed to*
It's a Sunday afternoon
and the sky is oh so blue
I wonder where you are
and I want to find you

Let me know what think of the change.
#10
Like the change i think the ending is much more suited to the song, rather than the implyed hopelessness of the original the desire to search implicates a possible happier ending to the tale being told.
#11
The song is for my girlfriend; she is in colorado and i'm in texas, so I miss her alot. I get to visit her at the end of the month and I want to have the song done for her by then.