#1
i wrote this song bc my girlfriend asked me too, its really girly in a way, and so on

verse 1
take me back to the night when i first realized
so much has changed, nothing ever stays the same
but one thing that will always reamian true is how i feel about you

chorus
i wanna watch the sun set with you all night long
i wanna hold you till the break of dawn
i wanna catch you, even if i break the fall
beacuse all i wanna do it just be with you

verse 2
i would watch candy man with you a thousand times
and never get bored as long as your by my side
i would spend a whole day with you shopping
i would hold your hair if you drank from a fountain
just take me back to the night when i first realized

chorus
i wanna watch the sun set with you all night long
i wanna hold you till the break of dawn
i wanna catch you, even if i break the fall
beacuse all i wanna do it just be with you


please crit, ill do the same
#2
well its a very used subject, but i guess if your girlf askd u 2 make it then i guess thats fdair enough... i like the way you used "i'd hold your hair if you drank from a fountain"... i thought that was very clever... i guess id give this a 7/10...
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Im saying this the straightest way possible, but...

I'd have sexual intercourse with your anus.