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This is the second version of lyrics to the same music. The first can be found here. I think critcally/technically these aren't quite as strong, but I think in terms of what I was trying to say, these are much closer.

Rise

I see you in the silver lining of the clouds
You're beautiful looking down on me
You're always looking down on me
And hidding the sunlight from my eyes
To keep me in the dark
To keep me wondering

What are you so
Afraid of what do you
Hide behind
Your sunset eyes?
What did you find
Or are still looking for
While lying awake in the
Hours of the night?

I see you pale in melancholy clouds
Only shinning with the stars
Only casting your shadow by moonlight
A reflection an echo of the light I felt
On my lips a year ago
Before you ran away into the
Fire lining of the clouds

What are you so
Afraid of what do you
Hide behind
Your sunset eyes
What did you find
Or are still looking for
While lying awake in the
Hours of the night?

Rock On
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