#1
Finally works

so here it is; emo kid!

www.purevolume.com/blimpt

suggestions? listen to the other songs to if you like!
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Set-up
My very own baby with LED's
GX212 Ultratwin by Behringer
MT-2 boss metal zone pedal
#2
- Your voice lacks energy
- Sloppy parts on guitar
- Lyrics: Been done before, it's getting tiring

Sorry if I sound harsh, I don't mean to.
Guitarrist living in the Kitchener/Waterloo area and looking to join a band.
#3
1) Your voice is dull.

2) Lyrics are plain, and not really original.

3) Guitar playing is kind of half-assed.

Trying putting a little more energy or something into your singing, and come up with a lyrical theme that hasn't been over-used.

Keep at it.
#4
alright its cool, it took me 30 minutes to write

what about the other 2 if you dont mind me asking?
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Set-up
My very own baby with LED's
GX212 Ultratwin by Behringer
MT-2 boss metal zone pedal