#1
The Stare and the Confirmation

I was feeling naughty. This is the product.

Sitting on the seat and all I can see, is this
Pretty little thing grabbin? a bite to eat
She walks in blue and stares in brown
Well miss, what have I found?

She turns to me, a lady in blue
A little something more too
The stare she gave me
What a sight to see

Come on, we?ve got a situation
It?s a little bit of?
Gratification
Let?s go, we?ve got a confirmation

So she walks over to me and she says
What?s your name?
And I smirk to her, I say
You tell me first, babe
She smirks and smiles and flirts and styles
Baby, I?m your best nightmare
So I take her home, and I
Don?t even have to try, ?cause
Minute I?m in the door, she?s
Got me on the floor.

Come on, we?ve got a situation
It?s a little bit of?
Gratification
Let?s go, we?ve got a confirmation
It?s a little bit of?
Gratification
Let?s go, we?ve got a confirmation
#2
It was a nice attempt. Slight old RHCP style (just the topic, really).

The flow was patchy in places, some of the rhyming was poor- but it was alright in all.

7/10. Good Job.
#3
hmmmmmm......... i found it highly arousing...........

9/10
=p

franz xx
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