#1
Hey im new to writing riffs and here are a couple which i just recorded (the second ones pretty much improvised). The recording quality isnt great as it was done on my mp3 player but it should do for now.

http://www.putfile.com/fireball85

One problem im having is coming up with a chorus for the 1st riff.. could anyone help please?

Thanks
Last edited by fireball85 at Jun 8, 2006,
#3
Thanks, yeh the scaley lick was a trill:

9h10p9 but i was improvising around that point so i guess i found out what doesnt work! :P

take the root notes of the riff for the chorus? shall give that a go.

Thanks
#6
Please could someone also give me some crit on the other things ive uploaded today, including the rather shoddy slipknot covers lol?

Thanks, and remember it's a crit for crit thread, feel free to post your links here.