Hey im new to writing riffs and here are a couple which i just recorded (the second ones pretty much improvised). The recording quality isnt great as it was done on my mp3 player but it should do for now.


One problem im having is coming up with a chorus for the 1st riff.. could anyone help please?

Last edited by fireball85 at Jun 8, 2006,
Thanks, yeh the scaley lick was a trill:

9h10p9 but i was improvising around that point so i guess i found out what doesnt work! :P

take the root notes of the riff for the chorus? shall give that a go.

Please could someone also give me some crit on the other things ive uploaded today, including the rather shoddy slipknot covers lol?

Thanks, and remember it's a crit for crit thread, feel free to post your links here.