hey i have benn wanting to write a red hot chili peppers style song and i came up with this for an intro

B                 2                   2
G     1        1            1     1 
D 2      2        2       2    2      2
A              2                  2
Nice, i'm not sure how it's susposed to flow, it doesn't seem to have a set rhythm(i'm talking about the second riff you posted) but it could work as a great intro. Simple and effective.

I'm like..so cool

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