#1
Hey guys, most props go out to Dashboard89 (http://www.myspace.com/allisonisstartingaband) she did the instrumental parts.

I only did the vocals, which are not good.
So anyways
please crit.


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#2
Wow that sounded great, you have a great singing voice. Nice work!
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#3
i thought it was good i dont like that song its not my type of music but apart from 1 or 2 notes i thought it was better than the original well done.
#4
not a fan of any double tracked voice, unless there's harmonizing going on. A bit annoying, but it's just me. Other than that, vocals were really decent.

Piano is perfect, as far as I can tell.

Great job.
Last edited by GardenGnome26 at Jun 9, 2006,
#5
sweet.

Awesome vocals.

Thanks for doing this with me.

edit: I had to listen to it like twice to even hear the mistakes that I made because you covered them nicely...with that amazing voice of yours..
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Last edited by Dashboard89 at Jun 8, 2006,
#7
That's very good, the only thing I don't like is the random double tracked harmonizing.
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#10
Spot on. Amazing. Your vocals are amazing. Piano was amazing also. The song gets annoying, but you did it amazingly...
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#11
FREAKING AWESOME. 9.5/10
amazing vocals too.
only a couple of bad notes but no ones perfect.
*suggestion* replace the double tracking with a backup singer or a recording of you singing the backup...but don't double track it.
EDIT: oh yeah piano was pretttttty much perfect btw. gj to both of you!
Last edited by mr. jones3642 at Jun 9, 2006,
#12
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sounds good...its pretty good since i hate that f***ing song...



the song choice was mine..I was messing around with my keyboard and started playing it some how, and ended up investing a day into learning, then I realized I couldn't sing it, and I did decent on the keyboard and didn't want to ruin it with my vocals, so I asked Joey, whose voice has always amazed me, and he was kind enough to do it. So there is the story.
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#13
dash, i love your keyboard, i acutally thought it was a panio, i could slighlighly pickup the midi feel, but its good for a keyboard. thanks everyone, who commented. I know my vocals are off, sorry, i could re record them but i dont know if ill get them anywhere near as good as that version. plus daniel does the double tracking but he dosent do it like i did with the pesudo harmonisying (pesudo because it wasnt good, and it wasnt even real harmonizing it was off)

anyways thanks to all the commented.
#14
my keyboard usually doesn't sound that real when it's recorded, but I got these gold tipped cables from radio shack, and now it sounds great. I think the higher notes sound more midi.

Yes, thanks to all who commented.
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