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DYING THOUGHTS (not about suicide and i'm not emo)

its about wat this girl did to my friend

not leave his house and get in an accident...she just dumped him:


Dying Thoughts

She put on her scarf and walked out, left me without a doubt
She left at the midnight hour, nothing to be known
She got in her car and she drove away?.
(it was the midnight hour)
why didn?t sheeeeee?STAY!

[Chorus]
She left without a doubt
and I couldn?t stop her from walkinnn?.OUT!
ridin along the rode, pitch black no lights
canyon to the right, shes was found D.O.A.
[End Chorus]

woke up the next day didn?t see her car
so i turned on the t.v. and i heard she was dead
now i wonder, what her dying thoughts were
(did she miss me)
but should i care?
(did she regret leavin me)

[Chorus]
She left without a doubt
and I couldn?t stop her from walkinnn?.OUT!
ridin along the rode, pitch black no lights
canyon to the right, shes was found D.O.A.
[End Chorus]

now i miss her
no one to share my love with
now i miss her
no one to love me

god why didnt you take me instead?
so i ask, why herrrr!?
i guess it was all part of a plan you had for her
but now I miss her


plz critique my song