#1
she is a tired girl
with a sleepy soul
she would hibernate
in her pillows
and we got lost in the sheets
we were caught up in a dream
I am a boring boy
with a nondescript life
except for one part
everything else is a lie
everyday in bed, my only wish
is to just not exist
our only goal is to
live with love in our hearts
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Green day have to be one of the biggest emo bands in the world (and I still love them). Which do you lot think is there most emo song 'coz me and my friend can't decide lol
#4
Man I want that title sooo badly I could do so much.....

But then I realised the title didn't really fit with the piece. I was expecting a cheeky, upbeat song, but for me all I got was a lifeless poem. It's a good message, but this just seemed to be lacking any excitement when I read it. It doesn't flow greatly, and It just didn't do anything for me.

Good Luck though.
#5
haha you can have the title, i'm too lazy to title my pieces. i just take quotes from short stories i've written and use them.
Quote by emomints
Green day have to be one of the biggest emo bands in the world (and I still love them). Which do you lot think is there most emo song 'coz me and my friend can't decide lol