#1
A Puzzly of Mystery

You're put together like a jigsaw puzzle
And I can't find that last piece
That shows your face

I'll keep my eye out and around town
Maybe i'll find you in the coffee shop
Or the post office down my block

You might be out in the middle of the ocean
The last place I would think
But one day, just one day i'll find that puzzle piece
That will show me your face

I'll roll my window down
In the middle of Times Square
Check every billboard and avenue in town
Take a 6 hour flight to sunny LA
This piece remains to be unfound

You might be out in the middle of the ocean
The last place I would think
But one day, just one day i'll find that puzzle piece
To discover your face
You might be out in the middle of the ocean
But one day, just one day i'll find that puzzle piece
#2
Is this a song?(Im guessing it is)
"VANDALISM: Beautiful As A Rock In A Cop's Face."
Kurt Cobain
#3
And if it is its allright
"VANDALISM: Beautiful As A Rock In A Cop's Face."
Kurt Cobain
#4
Quote by xxZeroxx
Is this a song?(Im guessing it is)


Yes, it's a song.
#5
Pretty cool then believe me i have seen worse.=)
"VANDALISM: Beautiful As A Rock In A Cop's Face."
Kurt Cobain
#6
Short and sweet.

It wasn't awe-inspiring to read, but It's no bad thing. You had an idea, and you went about using it with confidence.

If it is a song, I suggest putting in a couple of rhymes. I know songs don't have to rhyme, but It does help the flow to it.

Check out the lyrics tips thread, you may be able to improve this piece.

Good job, 7/10.