#1
it's really just a small poem im just curious on wether i could make it a song. crit for crit

is this really the time of our lives fighting to be on top living only to be what they want us to be. just step back and you'll see what's going on find who you are keep track of the time dont waste it trying to be cool live life for you **** the heirarchy and the bull **** you dont need it find your self and leave this place the time is now that your freed from your own shackles run fight hate and leave it now
#2
Is this really the time of our lives?
Fighting to be on top?
Living only to be what they want us to be.

Just step back, you'll see what's going on
find who you are, keeping track of time,
don't waste it fitting in...


I think it could be a song... but i got bored of writing it