#1
This is a song i wrote. it's a death metal song, but it's pretty sweet. Tell me if it's any good! If you have any questions, hit me up!

Time is through

Verse 1
Living in fear
screaming for help
you left me here
just to save yourself

The reaper is coming
coming for me
his stealth is cunning
takes me carefully

Chorus x2
So watch out
I?m coming through
No doubts
My time is very few

Verse 2
See my face
see my fury
the reaper loves the chase
So we better hurry

Time is up
I?m falling to the ground
the system is corrupt
And I can?t hear any sound

Chorus x2
So watch out
I?m coming through
No doubts
My time is very few

Bridge(before solos)
The time is right
So I can tell you
To keep up the fight
My F***in time is through
(repeat 2 times)(screaming) My time is through
(solos)
(Repeat verse 1)
(Chorus x4)
#2
Well, it's pretty much what I expected after you said it was a 'death metal song'. The song seems to have pretty much no meaning or any real story as far as I can tell, maybe you should try and think a bit more about what you want to say in your lyrics instead of just words that rhyme.
#4
Well, it doesn't have a meaning as far as i am concerned. The story line (which I should have mentioned before) is about a guy who is dying and is looking for someone to take on his pains and troubles and **** like that. It's not bad for my first song...but I also think that I could do a hell of alot better in terms of meanings....ill post some more up later...thatnks a lot guys!