#1
hey guys can y'all let me know what you think about this riff i've been workin on, it's really simple but i think it's fresh as hell. it's played really clean, and on standard tuning.

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---------------10---------------7----------------10/12--12--10/7-
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/-slide

let me know what y'all think and ways i can make it better, or wat i can add. i wanna use it for a song for my band. suggestions would be
#2
its pretty good what u should do is for the second bar play it again and chande the ending also for the chours of the song u should put lots of gain on it so like clean to gain!!!!!! can u crit mine here
#5
its not bad it just seems really empty especially at the end and during the slides. still pretty cool i tinkered around with it a little.