#3
thanks i really dont know what im doing yet...that song was all improv so i kinda drifted out sometimes on the solo part
#4
Sounds pretty good. My main suggestion would be to make the lead playing more difinitive and - well - taking the lead, because, right now it almost seems "unconfident" in it's quietnet, and occassionally it just seems kind of lost, not really sure where it's going. So, yeah, I'm guessing this was improvised; maybe if a future recording you can plan it out more to have an idea of where you want to take it. Still, nice playing =)

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