#1
so many people live off the sea,
full of fish and mystery,
seagulls go flying far from the coast,
bombs go crashing,
nukes are flashing,

what would you say if i could walk on water,
breathing is simple,
blowing up is hard,
turning steam to water was no mistake,

tired of pumping a story so youll listen was a mistake,
i just realised im full of it,
i am fake,

but A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand & touches your heart.
your probalby wondering where is the plot to all this,
so jumbled full of everything and nothing,
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i dont know if you dont like it i dont blame you
but it sounds good to me but im crazy so a crit for a crit and all that stuff thanx
#2
I like the choice of words you used.

but A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand & touches your heart.
your probalby wondering where is the plot to all this,
so jumbled full of everything and nothing,

To me, this stanza seems to not flow as well as the other ones.