#1
I wrote the words before
But it didn't work,
so I?ll try once more
I wrote in a letter
But it didn?t work
So maybe this one is better

And I don?t want you to hate me
But I want for you to see
And its hard for me to tell you
so maybe these words will come through

To a name that has no rhyme
Don?t tell the world,
but maybe this time you?ll see
To the name that doesn?t rhyme
Don?t waste your time
I think I?m starting to love you

I think I?ve made it plain to see
But will it work
I hope for a yes, not maybe
Do I even have a small chance
could you love
would you even give me that chance

You know you want to
Pull my heart through
And its hard for me to tell you
so maybe these words will come through

To a name that has no rhyme
Don?t tell the world,
but maybe this time you?ll see
To the name that doesn?t rhyme
Don?t waste your time
I think I?m starting to love you

And if you love me tell me
If there?s a chance tell me
If it could be tell me
And if it can?t, you might kill me
Last edited by Bard Morons at Jun 10, 2006,
#2
you started this really strongly i really liked it and the way you ended it awesome thanks for the crits on my piece i appriciate it and i kinda told you wrong about what it meant is he feels like people really suck and he wants them to go away nothing to do with worshiping satan sorry i mistold you
#5
Aww i really really like this.
It does seem like you mean it - who's the lucky lady then?

Love this bit:
To the name that doesn?t rhyme
Don?t waste your time
I think I?m starting to love you


Awesome man, 10/10
franz xx:heartxx
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#6
Do I even have a small chance
could you love
would you even give me that chance


=P
i think she can and i think she would....
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#7
Dude, just to let you know, i cant PM you for some reason, it says that you cannot recieve messages
=[

franz
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