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ok new acoustic song crit for crit

Come with me when the sun is shining
and when its not so cold,
The world today is full of pain
and i can't be alone.
Carry me out of the darkness
and with me take my soul
Redemption seems like a good idea,
a good idea on the whole.

When the summer comes I'll escape with you
When the pain is gone and the scars are few
When the sun is bright I'll escape with you
When the grass is green and the skies are blue

I think of you

Imprisoned by these four walls
with darkness in my mind,
you were the only source
of comfort I could find.
Looking round my empty room
and guess what caught my gaze
a photo of me and you
in those happier days

When the summer comes I'll escape with you
When the pain is gone and the scars are few
When the sun is bright I'll escape with you
When the grass is green and the skies are blue

I think of you
I'll escape with you.