#1
I hope this song is self expainitory

Smile
And shake my hand
Say, say you're my friend
A grin looks really vile
It could look better burned
It makes my mind feels bile
My mind feels bile

The masks you wear is a choice
Can't you remove it
And let them die in peace
Lies seep from your voice
Can't you stop
And let them die in peace

Came to me with despair
More violent then a bear
Turn my tail
Then you bite me
Stinging like a bee
Liars everywhere
Dislike sitting here
Look at the man on the stage
With a grin I think is truly vile
Makes my mind feel bile
Once again my mind feels bile

The masks you wear is a choice
Can't you remove it
And let them die in peace
Lies seep from your voice
Can't you stop
And let them die in peace

No one here is free
They probally never read philosophy
Sit there listen to one man
Like zombies they drink his gin
When they clap
His smile becomes vile
Makes my mind feel bile
My mind feels bile

The masks you wear is a choice
Can't you remove it
And let them die in peace
Lies seep from your voice
Can't you stop
And let them die in peace

The masks you wear is a choice
Can't you remove it
And let them die in peace
Lies seep from your voice
Can't you stop
And let them die in peace

Smile
And shake my hand
Say, say you're my friend
A grin looks really vile
It could look better burned
It makes my mind feels bile
My mind feels bile
Those masks are vile
#2
I acctually really liked thism exspecially the verse starting with NO ONE HERE IS FREE. Good job, sorry for such a short crit.
The Devil may.
#3
Quote by ShaneTheMan
I acctually really liked thism exspecially the verse starting with NO ONE HERE IS FREE. Good job, sorry for such a short crit.


Thanks. Anyone else havr any suggestions, ideas, crits? I'd love to hear from more of you on this song.