This is pretty good actually, for it's genre. The lyrics are pretty good, really fit the genre. Guitar is clean and polished. The vocals sound a bit dull at some points, it sounds like you're really up close to the mic. I'd try standing back a bit and singing/yelling louder, it fits the genre better.
If you could.

I'm not very active here on UG currently.
I'm a retired Supermod off to the greener pastures of the real world.