#1
okay.. so this afternoon, i went to pick up my pen and paper and started jotting down some lyrics.. i wanna share it with ya'll.. this is my FIRST song ever! so bear with me if i suck.. and this is just scratch.. still have to mould it into a good song.. that's why i'm asking for your honest opinions.. here it goes..

PHOTOPHOBIC

I wake up to a new day
Only to find nothing has changed
Still living in the dark
Can't seem to find my way


Somebody help me
I want to find the light
Lead me to the right direction


I wake up to a new day
Only to feel forgotten again
Still alone in the dark
Seems like no one cares


Somebody help me
Someone show me the light
Lead me to the right direction


that's it.. feel free to comment on this.. but please.. no foul languages.. no explicit comments people.. oh, and feel free to ask questions about the song.. thnx..
"I know I can never be enough to replace your whatever. Now everything is silent, everything is still without you near..."
-SPONGE COLA
#4
^ it's not actually my first composition.. i've written poems before.. but this is my first song.. there's a difference.. thnx for the comments..
"I know I can never be enough to replace your whatever. Now everything is silent, everything is still without you near..."
-SPONGE COLA