#1
hey is this a good riff {metal} also what key and scale?


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#2
What is the rhythm? the way i played it it sounded okay but not great. Doesn't really seem like much of a metal riff either. Anyway, just keep expanding on this and maybe you can come up with something better.

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#3
Eh...
On the 1st and second phase of chords, the F# drowns out the others so you can't even hear a differance... Maybe if you played it like this... (But personal that last part sounds alot like Come As You Are -by- Nirvana, and I don't think it fits well)


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