#1
Hello
This is my cover of Second Heartbeat
the song is originally by avenged sevenfold
2 guitars, both of them are me
used audacity,
the solo probably sucks because i just kind of messed around and im still working on it

Please crit

http://thrash.dmusic.com/

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Gear:
Schecter S1 Elite Black Cherry (Soapbar Neck, Invader Bridge)
Schecter Banshee
Orange Dual Terror
Boss CE-5
Goatkeeper
Last edited by Guitarplaya27 at Jun 11, 2006,
#2
needs work. tighten it up. i hear a few sour notes in there, and your intro muted stuff needs to be cleaned up a lot. USE A METRONOME!!!! not terrible, but lots to work on. feel free to crit me at the link below. looks like you dial in a lil better tone with the gear you list also.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=374408
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GEAR:
Fender Custom Tele-
Invader (B)
ESP/LTD EC-400-
EMG 81 (B) / 60 (N)
DigiTech RP-200
Zakk Wylde OD
Boss Bf-2
MXR Phase 90
Crate Blue Voodoo 120 Half Stack
#4
sounds good, it needs a bit of practice to get it cleaner overall its well on the way.
Good work
#5
ya make it a little cleaner and youll have it,
pretty nice job overall though

thx for crit
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#6
gd to see a fellow a7x fan on here! lol

id definately use a metronome or drum-track on here just to help get the harmonized riffs in time with each other. but yeh the playing's generally pretty solid, maybe practice the palm-muted sections a bit more and work on the solo (but i no its pretty difficult so i'l let u off, lol). wot guitar u using?


check out my nipple remix of 'all the small things' if u get a chance!

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=379206
#7
Not gonna lie, this was terrible and it sounds to me like you're tone deaf. You played almost everything wrong and off-key.
#8
Quote by Fender67019
Not gonna lie, this was terrible and it sounds to me like you're tone deaf. You played almost everything wrong and off-key.

im amazed you're the ONLY person else to say this.

im sorry but i have to agree with the above person...it was terrible IMO.
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